so BAD

Just went through this part of the novella. It's so bad it's not even funny. And I don't know how the hell I'm supposed to salvage it.

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HOW the FUCK am I supposed to invent gold out of a 23,000-words worth of ABSOLUTE crap? Should I change it all to present tense? Add scenes? Add drama? Add people? And HOW am I SUPPOSED to make THIS ONE CHARACTER more interesting? He is so boring I could fall asleep just reading about his hair.

And when I cut out the ramblings, EVERYTHING is too SHORT and too UNDESCRIBED, and I don't even have enough of 40,000 words to QUALIFY for a novelLA.

It's like I have to rephrase EVERYTHING.

*howls*

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Ugh.